Hi,
I have a few additional comments/corrections to the NIM paper. Page
numbers start with the front page.
p.2 col 2 versus p.5 col 2: Please choose between p(||) and p(par)
Fig 2 caption. The ZDCs (not depicted) --> The ZDCs
Fig 2. Arrow pointing to TOFW should be longer.
Fig 2. Could the beam pipe be continued at least up to the DX magnets?
p.11, Drift Chambers: change first sentance to:
The Drift Chambers (DCs) employed in BRAHMS will be ...
p.11, col 2 mid: A small quantity of the ethylene -->
A small quantity of ethylene
p.12, par 1 end: The multiplexing is used for the T4 and T5 DCs. -->
This multiplexing is used for T4 and T5.
p.12, par 2: 82 um in the position resolution, somewhat ... -->
82 um, somewhat ...
Fig 12: use the new one from Djamel
Fig 12 caption: length of a slat (y-direction). -->
length of the slag (y direction).
p.15 col 2 middle: 630 torr --> 840 mbar
p.19 par 2: The two kinds of modules used in the arrays. -->
Two kinds of modules are used in the arrays.
p.21 col 1 last par: IP --> Interaction Point
DAQ --> Data Acquisition
p.22 col 1 middle: A rough vertex selection based on a making -->
A rough vertex selection based on making
p.22 col2 last par: Switched Capacitor Array -->
Switched Capacitor Array (SCA)
p.23 col 1, middle: an amount depending on the filling factors of -->
an amount that depends on the filling factors of
Note: to my taste of English there are far too many -ing
endings in this section. Many more could be reformulated
similarly to the above suggestion.
p.23 col 1, middle: in a 10 bit ADC's -->
either: in a 10 bit ADC
or: in 10 bit ADCs
Fig 29: replace by the new one from Djamel
Fig 29 caption: ... pions, kaons and protons. The solid ... curve. -->
... pions, kaons, protons and deuterons.
Fig 30. This figure clearly displays a wrong refractive index, but I
think Claus has produced a better one. Please replace.
Regards,
Borge
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