From: Jerzy Cibor (ufcibor@cyf-kr.edu.pl)
Date: Tue Jul 01 2003 - 11:48:45 EDT
Dear Claus and Ian, Below you can find comments from Krakow group regarding high pt paper draft 4.0. The general comment is that we found the draft a very nice piece of work. We also think that the derived physics conclusions are well established in the contexts of the presented data. Apart from details other people already mentioned here are our corrections and suggestions: 1. In the list of affiliations replace "Smoluchkowski" by "M. Smoluchowski" 2. First paragraph: We propose to replace "...extremely hot high-density region..." by "...extremely high energy-density region..." - we should specify what kind of density we have in mind, e.g. the baryon density is rather low. 3. If the 5GeV/fm^3 is from Bjorken formula PS estimates give 4GeV/fm^3 for the lower limit, assuming <Et>=0.5GeV, tau_o=1fm/c, radius of Au, BRAHMS dNch/deta at mid-rapidity and that the charge particles consist 2/3 of the all emitted particles. 4. In Fig.1 one could suspect that (/3) ... (/10) denotes the scaling factors applied to the spectra presented, but we think, that we should state it somewhere explicitly e.g. in the figure caption. 5. Caption of Fig. 3: replace "...at eta =0 and eta=2.2.." by "...at eta=2.2 and eta=0.." 6. In "200GeV" add a space between "200" and "GeV" (this appears in a few places). Best Regards, Krakow Group
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