_Really_ minor language remarks:
page 3 - line 10B - ( par 2 ) - collsions -> collisions, B = from bottom
page 4 - line 4 - ( par 2 ) - (K+/K-) -> (K-/K+)
page 4 - line 7 - ( par 2 ) - antiparticle/particles ->
antiparticle/particle
page 4 - line 15 - ( par 3 ) - of the of the -> remove one 'of the'
page 4 - line 16 - ( par 3 ) - Kaons -> kaons ( for consistency )
page 4 - line 18 - ( par 4 ) - 0.82 +- -> give errors
page 4 - line 33 - ( par 5 ) - support abbreviation for the drift chambers
page 4 - - ( par 5 ) - why Time Projection Chamber and
time of flight wall ( sometimes you use
large letters and sometimes small )
page 7 - line 6 - ( par 1 ) - rapiditiy -> rapidity
page 7 - line 8 - ( par 2 ) - is the koma before 'indicates' necessary?
page 8 - line 6 - ( par 2 ) - theDanish -> the Danish
Best regards,
Radek
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| Radoslaw Karabowicz |
| Hot Matter Division |
| Institute of Physics |
| Jagiellonian University |
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