[Brahms-l] FW: QM contribution

-----Original Message-----
From: Bekele, Selemon
Sent: Thu 1/18/2007 10:43 AM
To: Truls Martin Larsen
Subject: QM contribution
 

Hi Truls,

   hope you are doing fine. I read through your contribution 
to QM 2006. Very nice paper. I have a few comments:

1) Page 1, Line 4

   When you talk about high pt suppression in dAu to be a final state effect
   you did not mention at what rapidty,i.e., mid- or forward rapidity? I think
   this has to be clearly stated.

2) Page 1, Line 7

    have --->  has

3) Page 1, Line 8

   You mention that the energy loss will be proportional to L^2 but you did not
   say what L^2 is and from where the stated dependence follows. 

   I would change the sentence:

      The energy loss is found to be proportional to L^2 wher L is ...

   or provide more information 
4)  page 2, line 5

   change to 

       ... BRAHMS results from collisions ...

5) page 3, Fig .3 caption, 2nd line

    The systematic ---> The systematic errors

6) page 3, 3rd line

   < Nbin ---> <Nbin> 

   I am not sure the binary collisions considered in the Glauber
 model are between the partons in the nucleons. Is that the case?
 If not, I would change he sentence following <Nbin> to

      "the number of binary collisions the nucleons in one of the colliding
nuclei go through". 


Selemon,

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