[Brahms-l] Re: Fw: Proofs of [NUPHA_9767]

From: Peter H.L. Christiansen <pchristi@nbi.dk>
Date: Thu Mar 10 2005 - 09:31:58 EST
Hi,

I have found the following corrections in section 1-3:
page 6:
line 26: 0-10% => 0-5%
line 42: 2.0+-0.4 => 2.0+-0.1 (or 1.45 < dy < 2.45)

page 25:
line 35: P.Christiansen => STAR Collaboration, C. Adler
In general reference 19 is way to long and I would reduce it to our PRL 
only and skip the rest and maybe add: "and references therein". This is 
our specialty and there is no reason to quote the other experiments or our 
old proceedings with less optimal results. (I would of course also be 
happy to keep the reference to my Ph.D. thesis:)
Finally one should change line 33 so that
BRAHMS Collaboration	becomes	 BRAHMS Collaboration, I.G. Bearden, et al
to match the other references.
line 43: Ph.D. Thesis => Submitted to Phys. Rev. Lett.

I will continue to read, but just wanted to make sure to get this in the 
paper.

Cheers,
   Peter

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