Dear Friends Apart from a few trivial comments on language and typograpy, I felt reading the paper a few weeks ago that the introduction and the conclusions are too tame and probably will cause problems with a letter journal as PLB. I suggest a little work to give some more punch and perspective to the introduction and to rewrite the last para. to be conclusions rather than summary. Easier said than done, but nonetheless..... cheers JJ ____________________________________________________________ Jens Jørgen Gaardhøje, Assoc. Prof., Dr. Sc. Niels Bohr Institute, Blegdamsvej 17, 2100 Copenhagen, Denmark. Tlf: (+45) 35 32 53 09, secr. (+45) 35 32 52 09, Fax: (+45) 35 32 50 16. UNESCO Natl. Comm., secr. (+45) 33 92 52 16. Email: gardhoje@nbi.dk. ____________________________________________________________ ----- Original Message ----- From: flemming videbaek To: brahms-l Sent: Saturday, April 10, 2004 3:04 AM Subject: [Brahms-l] y=0,1 centrality dependence paper Dear Collaborator, Some of you have already supplied valuable comments to the draft written by JH.Lee an E.J.Kim. The nominal deadline was this just passed Wednesday. Due in part to the vacation around these days we extend the comment period, but will like to have final comments by this next Wednesday April 14 after which a final version will be prepared, announched, and submitted unless serious concerns are raised. best regards Flemming, JH and Eun-Joo ---------------------------------------------------------------- Flemming Videbaek Physics Department Brookhaven National Laboratory e-mail: videbaek@bnl.gov phone: 631-344-4106 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ _______________________________________________ Brahms-l mailing list Brahms-l@lists.bnl.gov http://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/brahms-l _______________________________________________ Brahms-l mailing list Brahms-l@lists.bnl.gov http://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/brahms-lReceived on Sun Apr 11 15:35:16 2004
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