From: yin.zhongbao@fi.uib.no
Date: Tue Jul 01 2003 - 15:10:40 EDT
Dear Ian,
still a few minor comments on the new version:
1) In paragraph 3: I would remove "using a scaling to our acceptance and
to the estimated number of binary collisions" since we will describe how
to compare in detail later.
I would replace "similar spectra" by "the invariant spectra" in the next
sentence.
2) FIG. 1 caption: I would use "have been scaled" instead of "have been
offset". The meaning of "scale" is very much different from "offset" if
translated to Chinese :) One is to multiply, the other is just to add
or subtract in order to cancel ...
3) FIG. 4 caption: "... for minimum bias collisions"
Can it be changed to "...for minimum bias (MB) collisions"? You used MB
to denote minimum bias in the figure as far as I saw.
4) In paragraph 9: "It is striking that the R_dAu factor ..."
I would remove "factor" which is part of the definition of R_AA.
5) Reference:
Some place need use {\bf ...}.
[11] "B. B: Back et al." --> "B. B. Back {\it et al.}"
Cheers,
Zhongbao
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On Tue, 1 Jul 2003, Ian Bearden wrote:
> I thought that this had been done last week.
> I guess since I never voted on such a policy I'm not bound by it?
> Wait, I think I tried that argument once before, but the judge didn't
> buy it...
> I'll try to get in touch with Flemming and find out if he did send the
> abstract.
> -Ian
> On tirsdag, jul 1, 2003, at 18:28 Europe/Copenhagen, Dana Beavis wrote:
>
> > Ian,
> >
> > Only a comment on submission. There is a "policy" about the process in
> > which
> > RHIC papers are submitted for publication. Not sure I know the
> > details, I
> > hope Flemming has given you guys the instructions. I think the
> > abstract has
> > to go to the Associate Director and the RHIC Spokespersons 1 week
> > before it
> > is submitted.
> > Anyway, someone must know or can find out, if Flemming did not leave
> > instructions.
> >
> > dana
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Ian Bearden" <bearden@nbi.dk>
> > To: <brahms-l@bnl.gov>
> > Sent: Tuesday, July 01, 2003 10:00 AM
> > Subject: guess what...a new version!
> >
> >
> >> Dear collaborators,
> >>
> >> Here is a new version of the High Pt draft.
> >> I have tried to accommodate most suggestions, as you will perhaps have
> >> seen in the flurry of emails in the past few hours.
> >> Please read this draft very carefully (but quickly!). I hope you find
> >> it acceptable.
> >> Best regards,
> >> Ian
> >
> >
>
>
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