Dear BRAHMS 200 GeV Paper Committee. I have two suggestions concerning a general structure of the paper. 1. In order to save a room for physics I suggest to combine some information about detectors into one table (e.g. rapidity range, distance from the vertex..). (I assume this will be a letter.) 2. I suggest to discuss the particle pseudorapidity distributions Fig. 1 and Fig. 3 in one section followed by subject connected with Fig. 2 (limiting fragmentation picture). Here, I suggest also to put more words about physics related to Fig. 2. Best regards. Zbigniew
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