Enclosed, please find the corrections of the p/p paper
suggested by the Krakow group:
p.1 - the author list : correct name is T. Kozik
p.2 - Abstract, spell in: ....for three rapidity values .....
p.3 - l.6 from the bottom, replace: ...18 m measure...
by
...18 m from the nominal intersection point...
p.4 - l.4 from the bottom, spell in: obtained
p.5 - l.1 from the top: cancel extra "F" at the end of the sentence.
p.5 - l.5 from the top: should be capital "F" in: Figure 1.
p.5 - l.6 from the top: should be Figure 1 (is Figure 2)
p.5 - l.6 from the top: replace "by the solid lines" by
"by the vertical lines" ??
p.5 - l.8 from the top: .....above and the ratio calculated.
It is unclear.
p.5 - l.10 from the top, spell in: systematic
p.5 - l.17 from the top, should be:
"In the FS this contribution is neglegible.
p.5 - l.19 from the top, is: "..., from bacground slow background
protons,..." and should be
"..., from background of slow protons"
also at the end of this line should be "absorption"
also in l.23 from the top should be "absorption"
p.5 - l.7 from the bottom is: "...H/B ratios of up to ....."
???
p.6 - l.4 from the top the reference should be included in:
"...from the ISR [xx]..."
p.6 - l.16 from the top, spell: "describes"
In the last sentence, please correct our acknowledgement:
Should be:
"the Jagiellonian University Grants"
References:
Add dots at the end of [9] and [13].
Fig. 1 caption: Should be:
The hatched areas show.....
-0.075 <...... GeV^2/c^2
0.5 <.......GeV^2/c^2
.......,in both cases. The......
Fig. 2 caption: include information on the symbols meaning.
Fig. 3: upper panel: 1. meaning of the histogram.
2.Y- axis nmbers are to small.
caption:
The data shown (points) are for........... in Fig. 2. The histogams
show the results of the HIJING [ ], FRITIOF [ ] and UrQMD [ ] model
calculations discussed in the text.
Regards.
Zbigniew
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