Re: Draft of multiplicity paper for discussion and inspiration

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Here are some remarks on the first draft of our 
paper prepared by Jens Jorgen. (I read Joe suggestion
and you can consider this as supplement to his).

1. In abstract we have:
"We present the first measurement of the multiplicity distribution
of charged particles as a function of collision centrality......"
however in text: 
"Fig. 1c shows the distribution of ......"  (add centrality cuts).

(I think there is a difference between "as a function" and presentation
for different cuts).

2. There is only one sentence on PHOBOS (comparison?). 

3. There is no information on: "What kind of charged particles were
detected?".

4. Corrected list of Polish group and our affiliation is included
   in the attachment.

Best regards.

Zbigniew

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