[Brahms-l] ichp06 contribution

Hi Pawel,

     hope you are doing fine. I read the paper
for ichp06. I have a few minor comments.
    
Page 1, 2nd column

   It would be good to mention the present understanding of 
the matter created at RHIC, eventhough the weakly interacting
QGP was proposed before two decades or so ago.

Page 2, 1st column, section 2, 2nd paragraph

  change
        ... The latter value, if it scales ...
  to
        ... The latter value, if it scales ...

  At the end of the same paragraph, change

         ... from being the simple ...
    to
         ... from being a simple ...  

Page 2, 2nd column, subsection 2.1

   I do not clearly see the rapidity dependence of
the ratios in Figure 1. You of course mention that 
the chemical potentials on the figure correspond to
different rapidities when discussing the fit to
the statistical model. It would be good to make
the connection early on while discussing the data.

Page 3, 2nd column, 3 lines before bottom

    change
        ... more than factor 2 ...
    to
        ... more than a factor of 2 ...

Page 4, 1st column, around end of section 3

    change typo "tree" to "three"



Cheers,

Selemon,
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