RE: [Brahms-l] A new version for the paper

From: J.H. Lee <jhlee@rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Date: Fri Jul 01 2005 - 12:07:01 EDT
Hi, Zhongbao,

I have a couple of general comments and 
a few minor comments/suggestions. 

According to the published results by us and PHOBOS,
R(eta=0) ~ R(eta=2.2), where
 
    dN/deta in AuAu for central (0-10% BRAHMS or 0-6% PHOBOS)
R = -------------------------------------------------------
                   dN/deta from UA5

In Fig. 2, RAuAu(y=0) is ~50% bigger than 
RAuAu(eta=2.2) at pt~0.5 GeV/c, near (slightly higher than) 
<pt> for pions. Taking into account quoted systematic errors, 
the difference is still significant.
I don't think the ratio of [pi-/charged hadron] changes 
significantly between eta=0 and 2.2 for the central AuAu 
and pp (or pbar-p).   If some Jacobian effect is (partly) 
responsible for this, we should try to separate trivial 
kinematics from dynamics.  
   
The physics conclusion/punch line seems a bit weak to me.
"An even stronger pi- suppression at forward rapidity
suggests that the hot dense partonic medium might also exist
in the forward rapidity region..." 
We probably need to discuss hydro and some other aspects. 
Please see my presentation at the mini-coll. meeting three 
weeks ago. 
http://www.sdcc.bnl.gov/brahms/private/meetings/June2005/index.html


Some (random) minor corrections/comments: 

Page2: "RAA = 1 at  pt > 2 GeV/c"
It's presumptuous. Soft/Hard boundary should be rather higher.

Eq. 1 Nuclear modification factor:
Why don't we say sigma_pp not sigma_NN? 
That's what we do.  In principle, they are not the same.
We also don't "correct for" or discuss isospin effect.
It's also mentioned as NN in the abstract

Page 2: The sentence "By taking the ratio..." is
too long.

Page 2: "So a reference spectrum shown...": a bit colloquial

Page 3: Fig1:
"error bars are statistic only"->
"error bars are statistical only". 
No description on the curves.

JH


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