Dear Eun-Jo, I like the newest version of the paper. A few remaining comments: on page 6 you write 'The fractions of protons produced ...by stopping'. I am not sure that I understand the sentence. The formula gives the ratio of net protons to the sum of p and pbar. This ratio gives, I would think, a measure of the protons NOT produced in the collision, but perhaps moved to that rapidity, from the beam rapidity, as a consequence of stopping. This is at variance with the statement. A little further on you'll need a 'significantLY' Following parag. again : but (no 'a') further exp....). In the ref. list I have stumbled across retiere et al with a preprint that is from 2001. Is this not published? If not perhaps there is a reason. ref 35. Phy(S). kind regards JJ ._________________________________________________________________________ Jens Jørgen Gaardhøje, Professor, Dr. Sc. Niels Bohr Institute, Blegdamsvej 17, 2100 Copenhagen, Denmark. Tlf: (+45) 35 32 53 09, secr. (+45) 35 32 52 09, Fax: (+45) 35 32 50 16. UNESCO Natl. Comm.: secr. (+45) 33 92 52 16. Email: gardhoje@nbi.dk. _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Brahms-l mailing list Brahms-l@lists.bnl.gov http://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/brahms-lReceived on Wed Mar 2 15:29:43 2005
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