RE: [Brahms-l] New version of RdA paper, will announce tomorrow

From: Bjorn H Samset <bjornhs@rcf2.rhic.bnl.gov>
Date: Tue Feb 24 2004 - 23:42:42 EST
On Tue, 24 Feb 2004, J.H. Lee wrote:

> I think the abstract is somewhat misleading.
>
> "The midrapidity Cronin enhancement and the forward rapidity suppression
> are more pronounces in the central collisions relative to peripheral
> collisions. This suggests strong initial state effects, possibly
related..."
>
> To me, it reads like that we are arguing the midrapidity Cronin
enhancement
> in the central collisions is also a strong 'initial state' effect.

You're probably right. What about simply changing to "...relative to
peripheral collisions. Our results suggest strong initial state effects,
possibly related..." i.e. just state first what we see and then what we
will conclude?

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