Re: [Brahms-l] QM04 poster DO

Hi Djamel,
Nice poster.  I just have a few suggestions:

"...production of charged particles..."  (plural particles)
"...is the K meson..." (rather than meson K)
"..., s quarks must be produced in the collisions, implying..."
"...w.r.t. to, e.g., NN collisions."  (need commas)
"...each side of the magnet gaps."  (plural)
"An extended phase-space (y,pt) coverage is achieved by
varying the spectrometer positions and the magnet field
settings."
"In the MRS, pions and kaons can be separated up to 2 GeV/c..."

I wonder if the notation <K> and <pi> is likely to lead to confusion
since <> usually is used to denote an average.  Why not use
K_tot an pi_tot?   Then you could replace "mean y" with "<y>".
On Friday, January 2, 2004, at 02:41 PM, Djamel Ouerdane wrote:

"...can be accounted for by the ..." (missing by)

ref [9] incomplete  nucl-ex citation

Regards,
Steve

> Hi,
>
> Here is the poster on meson production.
>
> http://www.nbi.dk/~ouerdane/poster.ps (> 1MB)
> http://www.nbi.dk/~ouerdane/poster.pdf (0.3 MB)
>
> The near final version of my talk will follow soon.
>
> Ciao
> Djam
>
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