From: Jens Jørgen Gaardhøje (gardhoje@nbi.dk)
Date: Thu Nov 28 2002 - 10:00:51 EST
Hi Peter
Here are some comments from a first reading: Overall it looks quite OK.
1. drop: and has been looked for.
2. para 1 line 6 rapidity plateau with uniform particle production, i.e. ..
are constant as a function of rapidity.
3.para 2 line 3: define net-baryons. Also refer to PHOBOS results and
perhaps to lambda etc. from STAR.
4. para 3 explain PID.
5. p2 line 4 The data are collected at different angle ..
6. line 9. ...from the data by comparing the number of identied track
segments in the chamber to the number of reference tracks determined by
other detectors not using the chamber under consideration.
7. caption fig 2.
8. p3. line 2 temperature -> effective temperature, inverse lope parameter
or something else, but not temperature !
9. T=T/cosh(y) is not proper notation
10. The CURRENT systematic errors ....
11. section 3. last para. If the anti proton yields... HEAVY and
COMPLICATED. REPHRASE.
12. Figure 4: Why not take the figure we have also with AGS values. Perhaps
it is easier to read if the curves are plotted in 3 differnt panels (I guess
you don't want to use the BRAHMS guessstimate for the net protons...)
13. section 3. AT SPS... the sentense very unclear. REPHRASE
14. summary lat sent. indicating that a RHIC collisions are highly
transparent and suggest the onset of a boost invariant like plateau around
midrapidity.
15. refs.
ref 3: H.ITO, add also ref. to PRLs on mult.
ref 7 : these proceedings. REfer also to the QM talks for propaganda!
cheers
JJ
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From: "Peter H. L. Christiansen" <pchristi@nbi.dk>
To: <brahms-l@bnl.gov>
Sent: Wednesday, November 27, 2002 5:51 PM
Subject: Proceedings for PANIC02
> Hi
>
> I have written up my proceeding for PANIC02 (has to be delivered
> saturday).
>
> It can be found :
> http://www.nbi.dk/~pchristi/panic02.ps
> http://www.nbi.dk/~pchristi/panic02.pdf
>
> I know that there are a few references missing. They will be put in
> tomorrow.
>
> I will appreciate any comments - language and/or physics.
>
> Cheers
> Peter
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