From: Jens Jørgen Gaardhøje (gardhoje@nbi.dk)
Date: Thu Nov 21 2002 - 11:51:51 EST
Hi Djam. My comments to your draft follow - created in the air on the way to Geneva. 1: You must decide on the notation EITHER (k/pi)- OR (K-/pi-) etc.. I prefer the latter. 2. abstract while they drop -> but they drop. 3. p2 para 1 line1 cover a ->subtend 4. line 4: specie->species 5. cahnge 3rd sentence to. Corrections for detector eff. ,...., are applied to pt ot mt spectra. 6. next sentence: start with Fig. 2 shows ... 7) ordinate on the plot: 1/ptdN/dpdpt . abcissa: pt 8) section 3. line 3. READ: whereas systematic errors are estimated to be 15% refelcting the method used to extrapolate the lower part .... 9) line 6: we also note that the antihadron to hadron ratios are close to unity ... 10) label on ordinate of fig.4. is too big and ugly. 11) p3 line -5: as we gohigher -> with increasing 12) line-4: seems to show->reflects 13) last lines: ->extrapolations to low pt. The statistical ... Hi JH. Comments to your draft. 1) line 4: it is conjectured -> has been conjectured. 2) line 5: period after stopping. Insert: A central plateau may be created with approximately constant production of particlres per unit of rapidity due to the brsaking of color strings. DELETE: and a central rapidity palteau is created. 3)line 6: REMOVE 'of the plateau' 4) line 7: is sensitive->depends on the early phaseS of the collision..Theoretical models ... 5) line 9: based mainly on different assumptions about the initial conditions... 6)para 2 line 4: ...this analyysis... 7) line 5: Only the 0-10%... 8) last sentence of para 2: The spectra have not been ..anti-protons from weak.... 9)fig1: abcissa numbers are to small 10)...turbulence in the air...OOPS 11)p2. l+2: parametrizations->functions. A fir with two exponentials results ina yields that are smaller by 8%, while a B... 12) The major ... is from extrapolation to the low momentum region. OIther maoin... 13) p 2, para 2: We estimate that lambda, feed down corrections decrease the yiels by about 15% by assuming .... For y=2.9 we may scale ...0.7. This results in a decrease of the net proton yield by 14.5 %. At y=0 it implies a net baryon number of 15, assuming that ...- 14) figyure 2: Stars are too small. abcissa labels (numbers are too small) 15) p 3 line 3. The rapidity dependence of the yieldS .... 16) p 3 para 2 last lines: The microscopic...which reproduces many observed features at SPS energies predicts much higher stopping ... 17) last para: shown->presented. 18) last para l 4. Peiod after y<=1.drop rest of sentence. 19) decrease->decreaseS 20) these results provide unique challenges and constraints... cheers jj ____________________________________________________________ Jens Jørgen Gaardhøje, Assoc. Prof., Dr. Sc. Niels Bohr Institute, Blegdamsvej 17, 2100 Copenhagen, Denmark. Tlf: (+45) 35 32 53 09, secr. (+45) 35 32 52 09, Fax: (+45) 35 32 50 16. UNESCO Natl. Comm., secr. (+45) 33 92 52 16. Email: gardhoje@nbi.dk. ____________________________________________________________
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