Dear JH, I would shorten the title to: "Net baryon density as a function of rapidity in central Au+Au collisions at maximum RHIC energy" (see Ian's email). Rephrase first sentence (see Ian's proposal), especially "small rapidity loss". The (absolute) rapidity loss is largest at RHIC. Add a comparsion of RHIC200 data to SIS, AGS, SPS and RHIC130. There is a lot of nice data available. With best wishes, Dieter ------------------------------------------------------------------- Dieter Roehrich | Fysisk institutt | Email: Dieter.Rohrich@fi.uib.no Universitetet i Bergen | Tel: +47-555-82722 Allegt. 55 | Fax: +47-555-89440 N-5007 Bergen, Norway | WWW: http://www.fi.uib.no/php/drhrich.html On Wed, 15 May 2002, Ian Bearden wrote: > Hi JH, > In the title, maybe a question mark... > "Where do the nucleons go? Net baryon density as a function of rapidity in > central Au+Au collisions at maximum RHIC energy." > The first sentence is a bit too long, how about: > > A primary goal at RHIC is to create and characterize the highly excited > matter resulting from nuclear collisions at extremely high energies. > I would suggest a slight rewording of the rest, but this probably more a > matter of taste (but you did ask for comments, so....) > Theoretical models predict different net-baryon densities rapidity > dependence depending upon how the dynamics of baryon number transport is > treated. In order to discriminate among the available models, measurements > of the rapidity dependence of the net-baryon density are necessary. > BRAHMS is unique among the RHIC experiments in its ability to measure > identified charged particle spectra over a very broad range in rapidity and > transverse momentum. > > In the last sentence.. > Will you compare to other data p+p? 130GeV? SPS?, if so maybe say the > results will be compared to theoretical predictions and to other available > data. > > > That is my 2cents, > Cheers, > Ian > -----Original Message----- > From: owner-brahms-l@bnl.gov [mailto:owner-brahms-l@bnl.gov]On Behalf Of > J.H. Lee > Sent: 14. maj 2002 22:37 > To: brahms-l@bnl.gov > Subject: QM abstract for net-proton > > > Dear Collaborators, > > Here is the "net-proton" abstract for QM02. > Any comments would be appreciated. > > Regards, JH > >
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