Re: pbarp paper.

From: joe natowitz (natowitz@comp.tamu.edu)
Date: Mon Apr 09 2001 - 14:57:43 EDT

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A few language suggestions



Page 3  six lines from bottom

Not sure " non interacting neutrons " is correct.

page 3 - eight lines from bottom

Panels in the MRS and FS acceptance (directions or cones or regions) were 
not----

  Second paragraph- page 6- last 5 lines
Suggest
  " On the other hand, the Hijing model, which describes the overall 
charged particle yields at    = 0 ( reference), fails in describing the 
rapidity dependence of the anti-proton to proton yield ratio. ------ The 
UrQMD model underpredicts the anti-proton to proton yield ratio by almost a 
factor of two. These models exemplify the present theoretical understanding 
of heavy ion collisions in this new energy regime. None of these models 
offers ------


page 5 line 12 end  kaon (not kaons) and pion (not pions) peaks



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