[Brahms-dev-l] Fwd: deuteron paper

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> From: Fouad Rami <fouad.rami_at_ires.in2p3.fr>
> Date: March 22, 2010 2:22:46 PM EDT
> To: Ramiro Debbe <debbe_at_rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [Brahms-dev-l] deuteron paper
> 
> 
> 
> Hi Ramiro et al,
> 
> I have read the draft and found it very interesting and well written.
> Please find below a few comments.
> 
> List of Institutes: the name of our University has changed (again!). Please replace
> "Institut Pluridisciplinaire Hubert Curien, IN2P3-CNRS, Universit\'e Louis Paster, Strasbourg, France" by
> "Institut Pluridisciplinaire Hubert Curien, IN2P3-CNRS, Universit\'e de Strasbourg, Strasbourg, France"
> 
> Abstract, line 5: insert f(p_T) in -> ".. and the phase space density, f(p_T), are very ..."
> 
> Introduction, beginning of para 2: I think this is the appropriate place to give a few references for coalescence models.
> 
> Introduction, para 3: PHENIX results (p_T/n_quark scaling of v2) suggest that for p_T > 1.5 GeV/c deuterons are formed via direct coalescence of quarks. This seems to be inconsistent with the coalescence approach (nucleons) used in the paper for the extraction of  B2 and f(p_T) in the region p_T > 1.5 GeV/c!
> Perhaps I am misunderstanding something! any comment on that?
> 
> Section II-A, line 7: "measure multiplicities" -> "measure charged particle multiplicities"
> 
> Section II-C, last sentence: typo -> "... and protons determinE the "
> 
> Fig.1, caption: typo -> "The protonS and deuterons are ..."
> 
> Fig.2, caption: One should indicate the rapidity range in each panel.
> In the caption, 1st sentence: I suggest replacing "... protons versus p_T and rapidity." by "... protons versus p_T at various rapidities."
> 
> Table 1, last line: the range for the deuteron pt fit at y=3/1 starts from  2.5 (not 2.0 as indicated in the table), to be consistent with Fig.3.
> 
> Fig.4: indicate the rapidity range in each panel.
> In the caption: I suggest changing the beginning of the sentence to -> "B2 versus the transverse momentum per nucleon at several ..."
> 
> Section III, last para, 1st sentence: "... and the phase space DENSITY vary "
> 
> Table 2:
> - "p_T" should be "p_T/A (GeV/c)"
> - "B_2 * 10^4" -> "B_2 \times 10^4 (GeV² c^¯3)"
> - "f * 10³" -> "f \times  10³"
> 
> Reference 13: Rüdiger Scheibl and Ulrich Heinz, Phys. Rev. C59, 1585 (1999).
> 
> Reference 15: P. E. Hodgson, Nuclear Reactions and Nuclear Structure, Clarendon-Press, Oxford, 1971, p.453.
> 
> Best regards, Fouad
> 
> ----- Message de debbe_at_rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ---------
>    Date : Mon, 15 Mar 2010 16:57:40 -0400
>     De : Ramiro Debbe <debbe_at_rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Objet : [Brahms-dev-l] deuteron paper
>      À : devlist <brahms-dev-l_at_lists.bnl.gov>
>     Cc : Ramiro Debbe <debbe_at_bnl.gov>
> 
> 
>> Dear Collaborators,
>> On behalf of the authors of the dpAuAu paper please find here the latest version that comes out of several rounds of checks of data and text. Please give us your comments before the end of next week.
>> Thanks
>> 
>> 
> 
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