Dear Hongyan, Just a few things: Page 1, last sentence: I would replace "The Croning ..... the hight-pt suppression at forward rapidity are" by "The discussed nuclear effects can be" Fig 1. For printed black-white version that would be better to used different symbol shapes for different rapidity intervals (but this is not critical - just consider this option) Page3, sec. 4 (Stopping) 3-rd sentence: "... by fitting the data to a fit-function..." I thought that it is done in the opposite way - the function is fitted to the data? Cheers, Pawel. Hongyan Yang wrote: > Dear all, > please read my contribution to the qm06 once again, the deadline for > more comments is tonight (9pm European time). If you have comments, > please send them to me before that time. > > A lot of thanks to Dieter for helping me in correcting my mistakes, > and re-phrasing/wording in the weekend, which made this version in shape. > > Best regards, > Hongyan > >------------------------------------------------------------------------ > >_______________________________________________ >Brahms-dev-l mailing list >Brahms-dev-l_at_lists.bnl.gov >http://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/brahms-dev-l > > -- ---------------------------------------------------------------------- | Pawel Staszel | | Jagiellonian University | | Institute of Physics email: ufstasze_at_if.uj.edu.pl | | Reymonta 4 phone: (+48) 12 663 5705 | | Krakow 30059 FAX: (+48) 12 633 7086 | | Poland | ---------------------------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Brahms-dev-l mailing list Brahms-dev-l_at_lists.bnl.gov http://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/brahms-dev-lReceived on Mon Jan 29 2007 - 06:23:40 EST
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